PM sent. I like the last drawing you posted here.
Improvements? Missing "tattoo" which is part of her. The eyes and the eyebrows was nice, however in my mind's eye she has a softer and gentler look, less tense. She's asian and making her eyes smaller (IMG:
style_emoticons/default/13.gif) would probably help. I love the hair and the nose! I wish I can draw as good as you have Starlit!
I will add your drawing to her temple (and link to your page/works if you have one later - just let me know)