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post Jan 19 2008, 08:03 PM
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i um... i believe that the world is um perfect. i think that there is nothing wrong with anything because well, everything happens for a reason and well... its like a really cool way of fitting the peices together. like um have you ever seen um final destination. okay i know its stupid but like have you becuase that way they day the design and stuff is like how life works and stuff. um but um i think that this is how life works and makes our lives perfect but um i dont think we need to understand anything. i um think that we need to just live and enjoy life. i think... um never mind bye


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post Jan 22 2008, 06:32 PM
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um vagrant you have points but the thing i mostly see that i find very interesting in all is the definitive. everything has to be set in stone or its not complete. just because i believe i am perfect does not mean that i stop striving to be better. what makes me perfect is that i continue to live. to experience. to dream see my faults work on them and believe. you see perfection in my opinion is misunderstood. if a flower is beautiful and then dies was it any less perfect. if a cat is a perfect pet then scratches you for its own reason does the perfection fade. the thing that makes perfection perfection is the thing that makes life beautiful. it changes. it continues. it marches on. it improves on itself. the ultimate beings out there are considered perfect yet im sure if you got in contact with them they live and try to figure stuff out just like us. no one holds all the answers for change is change. the thing that makes me perfect is i accept me and i dont. i want to continue to be the shining light. i want to continue to change. but i believe everything fits in the cosmic scheme whether it exists or not. i believe we are all perfect because we are each unique.

" a woman walks home from work. usually she would take the subway but today is to perfect a day. she walks a block and sees a dog caught under a branch. she goes helps it and continues home. she makes it to the corner and decides she wants ice cream. she goes in and see a boy on the phone. he looks at the ice cream and keeps counting his change. he doesn't have enough. he starts saying some messed up things to the person on the phone. very dark and negative. the woman gets two ice creams hands him one buys both and smiles at the kid. he looks at her dumbfounded. say thanx and then runs home. she goes home and watches the political debate on tv till she falls asleep.

the dog runs off. sees a girl with an ice cream. comes up to her and the girl pets it. the dog licks her makes her laugh and then runs off. the dog runs until he sees a woman being held up with gun. he starts going to the scene until the man kicks the dog. the woman screams and the dog starts barking.

the woman is frantic and thinks that no one will help her until this dog comes. she doesn't know what to do but then a kid comes and yells "SOMEONE CALL THE POLICE" the man runs away. the woman is hysterically thankful and runs home to her husband and month old. she tells the husband the whole story and the man goes to the police. they say that they cant do anything since they are so short understaffed as is. the man throws a fit and storms out.

the man with the gun is sad when he gets home as he sees once more there is nothing to eat. his wife is still eating alpo dog food. his kids are wearing trashbags. thank god that this is an abandoned place. he was a successful business man till the company went under screwing him and others. now he resorted to this. he hated it but he couldnt stand the sight of how his family looked and what they were going through. what else could he do. that night he went to sleep cryin for the 8th time that week.

the girl goes inside and sees mommy and daddy fighting and runs to her room. she turns on the tv and sees a debate about politics and decides that she wants to do something with her life. she calls a friend. she and the friend argue then he changes his tone. he starts supporting her. so she has new found faith and starts that night coming up with ideas on how to change the world starting with her home town.

the friend is a boy in a store. he doesnt have enough for an ice cream. all he wants is one on this hot day. the girl is talking to him about her thoughts. "you cant make a difference. there is no hope this world is f***ed. i'm happy your all on good terms with the world but it wont happen. your a girl and in the ghetto. get over it." a woman buys him an ice cream. he is shocked. he starts talking to his friend without even thinking. " you know what though... if you want this that bad ill support you. i believe you could change the world." he hangs up and walks home. he hears a dog barking and then a scream for help. he runs to see a dog trying to protect a woman from getting robbed. he screams " SOMEONE CALL THE POLICE" the man runs away and the woman thanx the boy. the boy runs home and sits down on his bed thinking of everything till he goes to sleep."


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balancedmagi   Ummm... Hi, These Are Um My Ideas Dont Laugh Please.   Jan 19 2008, 08:03 PM
jlx   i um... i believe that the world is um perfect. i ...   Jan 20 2008, 10:24 AM
al_zaine   Not one being made life and has no right to change...   Jan 21 2008, 10:23 AM
balancedmagi   okay but let me um put in this... it is our percep...   Jan 21 2008, 11:52 PM
Vagrant Dreamer   I think this is perhaps one of the most misconstru...   Jan 22 2008, 01:19 AM
Uni_Verse   At this moment, everything looks perfect. I have ...   Jan 22 2008, 11:10 AM
Acid09   I think the over tone of the question touches on t...   Jan 23 2008, 06:33 PM
valkyrie   hey! the word "perfect" can imply a ...   Jan 23 2008, 10:02 PM
al_zaine   I think the over tone of the question touches on t...   Jan 24 2008, 06:48 PM
balancedmagi   wow... i must say... al_zaine you are really cool....   Jan 30 2008, 11:36 PM
plainsight   Everything that is, is as it should be.   Feb 14 2008, 06:50 PM
Goibniu   I had a satori experience a few years ago. In oth...   Feb 14 2008, 11:26 PM
al_zaine   A baby is born blind, some will see it as a hindra...   Feb 5 2009, 06:38 PM
Acid09   I think it comes down to what does it mean to be p...   Feb 5 2009, 08:10 PM
al_zaine   Theres a few thing toiling away in my mind about t...   Feb 5 2009, 10:24 PM
locust   Wat is perfection anyway? I think its a feeling, i...   Jul 25 2009, 08:04 PM

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