Seems like it's about time we christen this forum...
I'm working on a novella, and looking for some feedback.
Here's about 1/2 of the first chapter, but it stands on it's own, in that it's got almost an episodic feel to it... there's only gonna be 4 or 5 long chapters, anyway. I got about 20 pages more in hard copy, so if this generates any interest, I'll have some or all of that up soon.
http://thebrahmanator.tripod.com/writing/flight.doc